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After talking with TimeBoy and KingHuffy, I will revise To Kill A Young One to make it more acceptable. If anyone got any changes or revisions for me to make, I will be happy to hear them.

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:icontimeboy08:
TimeBoy08 Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2016
Only reason I suggested it aaa because ...looking back Boris had no development.even after he gave up on twilight, you still had him go after her.

and about him killing Ben...he would have done it already rather than than mess around with the pranks. It's like you can't decide whether Boris should be a serious threat or just a bully.
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:iconnigel5469:
nigel5469 Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
After all, I am rebooting all of his stories.
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:icontimeboy08:
TimeBoy08 Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2016
Even those hat could have just been chapters of a story?
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:iconnigel5469:
nigel5469 Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yes.
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:icontimeboy08:
TimeBoy08 Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2016
I see.
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:iconnigel5469:
nigel5469 Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yeah. I just need to look through his stories and see if they have crucial impact and role to the universe or not, as well as improving and improvising his OCs into a better one with some development and role in the stories.
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:icontimeboy08:
TimeBoy08 Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2016
I see. well I helped too; I might of given him a suggestion for Judge Fordyns hate for earth ponies but I'm not sure if he'll take it. I only did it to avoid just basically having a pony Frollo when he can have a Frollo LIKE character.
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:iconnigel5469:
nigel5469 Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
He isn't the only one that needs character development, a few needed, mostly Ben Valorheart - making a naive and innocent yet easily angered stallion about his mistakes and betrayal into a brave and wise hero (slowly in progress) as well as retrieving his Triforce Elements of Wisdom and Power. So, I will do the same to Boris from being knucklehead and obsessed in Twilight Sparkle become a more sympathic antihero with begrudging respect for Ben when he meets the mysterious Earth Pony in both Magic Duel Adaption and Road to the End Reboot. I will do the same on others as well, but it will take to understand and change its character's development and personality.
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:iconpokeneo1234:
pokeneo1234 Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2016  Professional
Are you sure about that?
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:iconmaster-of-the-boot:
Master-of-the-Boot Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Make it more acceptable how? I've not read this story yet
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:iconkingryhuff:
KingRyHuff Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2016
That's a very mature decision, Jus. 
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:icongreenrob:
Greenrob Featured By Owner Edited Oct 20, 2016
well you already know Pinkamena and her group that are known in the fic before and in To Kill a Young One will be more then happy to help out even I will lend a hand I helped with this before giving ideas that helped countered what would of been true blood results I will do so once more or the ideas used before will still work out right?
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:icontimeboy08:
TimeBoy08 Featured By Owner Edited Oct 20, 2016
Boris actually killing someone? Like not a foal, but a colt but showing remorse?  I always felt this story would have Been a great opportunity to show Boris has some good left inside him and actually show remorse. Plus I'm sorry but not every story can be a happy ending. Even the show had some bittersweet ends


and whilst you would make the agurment that he wants to kill Ben; that not true. After lorcan's wrath, all Boris did was pull pranks at the winter wrap up and blame Ben.
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