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Equestria Girls Remake chapter 7 part 1

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Okay, from the looks of things, I say I got two more chapters left and this story will soon be done. It has been a long time but I betcha it will be a good one. Here we go!

Chapter 7: Twilight, Main Five & Ben Mare VS. The Superior

Last time, Twilight Sparkle & the Main Five, finally stopped Sunset Shimmer from leading an army to conquer Equestria with their power of Friendship. Ben even helped by reawakening his own power with the Master Sword and together, knocked Boris's group out while Twilight's gang return everything to normal. Course, now that Sunset was defeated, Twilight offered the girl a choice to learn about friendship since the girl was now free of whatever dark evil that corrupted her. And just as everything was gonna be alright, an event froze time, and soon something unusual happened near the portal leading back to Equestria. The gang could only see some text lining of the being, but it was too much in blinding with the area.

"Everyone, stand ready," Twilight issued with a word of caution in her tone, whatever was coming might be an enemy.

Soon Spike, Phobos and Nyx took some cover near some areas while Sunset, seem nervous, but ran a bit back near some rubble rocks that scattered around from the earlier fight. The Main Five & Ben got themselves ready as Twilight saw they were prepared and just as she turn around however…

"Hugh!" Twilight gasp, because without warning, she was yelped back from when…something, or someone…PHASE THROUGH HER! And everything went black from view, but something was…heard.

"She said to check on preparations. I am her student, and I’ll do my royal duty, but the fate of Equestria does not rest on me making friends.

"But it did. A different kind of spark; I felt it the very moment I realized how happy I was to hear you—to see you. How much I cared about you. The spark ignited inside me……when I realized that you all…are my friends!

"Okay, a might’ stubborn; an’ ah’m awful sorry. Now, Ah know 'de town gave me 'e Prize Pony award, but 'de real award……is havin’ yew five as mah friends."

"Well, well, well. It seems we have some ne-e-eigh-sayers in the audience. Who is so ignorant as to challenge the magical ability of the Great and Powerful Trixie?"

"Beware! Beware, you pony folk! Those leaves of blue are not a joke!"

"Just because I’m a lady, doesn’t mean I cannot handle myself in a sticky situation."

"You…you should see the looks on your faces; Priceless!"

"You are a wonderful student, Twilight. I don’t have to get a letter every week to know that."

"Yeah. You’re right. And I guess I should also act with grace and humility when others outshine me…"

"Sunshine, sunshine, ladybugs awake; Clap your hooves and do a little shake!"

"I had to. I just had to. I couldn’t leave my friends. I just couldn’t! But I guess sometimes I will have to choose between them."

"Don’t know what I’d do without you."

"If you side with me and accept me as a teacher, I will teach you all I've learned this thousand years ago. You've already tasted it. Let me show you the true power of Dark Magic."

"It's funny, really, Twilight here was suspicious of my behavior all along. Too bad the rest of you were too caught up in your wedding planning to realize the suspicions were correct!"

"Keep trying, Twilight Sparkle. Maybe the magic of friendship can help you. Now if you'll excuse me, I have some chaos to wreak."

"Tell me, Sparkle. Is this the path that you willing to take and walk? I can help you, but only you will return me a favor."

"Gee, I wonder which one is the real you when you become a princess. Are you benevolent or a tyrant? You're not destined to become the first one. So you'd better be careful if I was you, or else you'll end up like King Sombra."

"Let me be honest wit' yew, Twilight, yew are a great friend. It's not matter o' right or wrong, but it's what yew believe in, sugar cube."

"Although I am a lady, but it does not mean that I am selfish and greedy because friendship and generosity is important. I cannot simply let it alone."

"I'd never let my friends down. I don't care how dangerous can be coz I'm always be loyal and be there for my friends."

"I will stand up for my friends no matter what, even the scariest monster I have to face. They need me."

"I can be random, but it doesn't mean that we aren't friends because everypony's my friend and I love to see my friends smile!"

"You display charity, compassion, devotion, integrity, optimism, and the leadership of a true princess."

"Sometimes decision can be hard. But you do it, not only for our people, but for everyone. That is the rulers' duty. It is our struggle, but worth fighting for."

"My decision is always stick with my family especially you, Twiley. Even if I'm the prince, but it doesn't mean that I'll change because I have you and everypony I remember and love. My decision is always what's best for everyone."

"That's not only what a true leader is, but what a true, true friend did."

"A leader like you always thinks of your friends and ponies, even me, Nyx and Ben first before yourself. Best of it is that you'd never give up on them no matter what."

"Remember what is important."

Finally, everything went back from black to color around Twilight as she fell on her bottom while whatever pass through her…moved on without stopping,

"Twilight!" The Main Five & Ben immediately came around to surround their friend, inspecting if the girl was injured, but so far…she seemed perfect okay.

"Mommy, are you okay?" Nyx cried out with concerns about what happened to Twilight now.

"Wha-what just happened?" Spike yelped a bit in having a hard time speaking in seeing what they saw happen like a ghost was now their opponent.

"I don't know, but I don't like it! Not ONE Bit!" Phobos shook his head off in really not liking what was going on now suddenly.

Finally, Twilight turn her head around towards the attention of the one that phase through her…like a ghost. And soon the being stopped moving from making footstep noises while Twilight, the Main Five and Ben were together to see from what description this character gave off, and the others watching this also paid close attention. The clothing was a uniform dress, appearing as a male human in this world the gang has come to understand. The uniform consists of a single black leather hooded coat. It's plainly adorned with a silver zipper & seemingly pointless silver beaded pull strings for the hood that form a semi-circle in the middle. He appears to be wearing hakama-esque pants that's the same color as his hooded coat and knee high silver trimmed boots. In addition to this, he wears leather-gloves of his outfit's color theme of some unknown length, as they disappear under bell shaped sleeves. The hems of his coat and shoulder pads where slightly pointed. It is crucial to point out, that the hood covers the face so well, none can see what or whoever the being looks like, lam sot like anyone could see pitch black.

"Who are you?" Twilight answered off to stand on her feet in demanding to know who this person was.

"My name…is of no importance." The unknown figure spoke off in response without even batting an eye or even recognizing those looking at him with his back to the gang.

"Hugh?" At the moment, Twilight & Sunset yelped with wide eye gasp from their stations, this figure's voice rang in their heads in…'knowing' who this was.

"You, so you're the one! You're the one behind this!" Twilight snapped off in now seeing & recognizing this unknown hooded creature before them, it all makes sense to her.

"Twilight, what are you talking about?" Rarity asked of puzzled in whatever could her friend mean.

"He's the one that was ordering Sunset Shimmer around and the one whose voice I heard in my dream to make me join him." Twilight explained to her friends writhe a serious face in what she knows from the voice alone, the true face behind manipulating Sunset Shimmer & to make the girl almost join this evil person's side.

"Wait a second, you mean that nightmare I woke you from back in the library?" Ben responded surprise to now recall that event, so this hooded man was responsible.

"Yes, he called himself…the Superior." Twilight narrow her stern eyes in just speaking off the very name of who this guy is before them. "But it's weird, I saw him as...a pony in my dream" She was in an utter lost of what was going on, the Superior she saw was possibly a stallion, but make no mistake, this human appearance did not hid the voice that Twilight recognized.

"Fella might've turn into de form ye all became when coming here?" Applejack stated with a thought on the subject, if Twilight's group & even Sunset changed from ponies to humans, so did this face hidden cloak guy.

"But wait, I just thought of something about what Sunset said." Ben suddenly stopped everything in just realizing something else from his memory. "The one she was working for was said to have summoned Discord during a great conflict centuries ago, around the same time that Discord tortured the Flutterpony known as Morning Glory. My mom told about what happened since she and my aunt were there at the time!" Ben has heard stories from his mother in Equestria, Celestia told him about the great conflict & something from the history connecting to the present here.

"What…happened?" Fluttershy asked a bit worried in what her friend would say.

"His name was said to have been given to him by a dragon of such fear, he wanted others to fear him. The name was…" Ben stated off in recalling that the person before them was no doubt someone that wanted to strike fear into every pony in Equestria, and it was… "Smaug The Great!" Ben narrow with serious eyes in glaring at the back of the enemy in which he's revealed to not only be the Superior that was getting in Twilight's dreams, but a villain from a far deep past. "But….he was only a unicorn, who passed away in the time period sometime after Discord was turned into a statue and it was ages ago!" The guy was still majorly confused, all records say that Smaug passed away long ago, he didn't have eternal youth like Celestia & Luna do. The only thing left might be descendants, but it couldn't be that either.

"Wait, so are we REALLY up against a ghost?" Pinkie Pie held up her hands in asking with a curious face if this unknown figure really is a ghost.

"Don't matter, if it's Smaug or whoever, he doesn't scare us!" Rainbow Dash issued off in flapping her wings up in declaring that this hooded foe doesn't frighten her.

Suddenly, the figure in the hooded cloak slowly turns around towards those talking behind him halfway while his face is still hidden under his hood. "How long has it been since I've nearly abandon that name." He responded out in questioning this fact from what he's heard the others address him as. "If you wish to address me, the Superior will suffice." He issued off that at this moment, all around shall know him; as the Superior.

"Gulp…" Sunset gulped from hearing hiding spot, for she truly knows the Superior and has a pretty uncomfy feeling about meeting him under these circumstances.

"Are you the one that did something to this world?" Twilight sternly demanded to know what this villain has done to this alternative world.

"Indeed." The Superior "But, the spell was only 'partially' effective when working on inhabitants of this world. Those outside of it or covered in protective magic won't be frozen in time."

"That explains why we're all fine." Spike responded off puzzle to study himself and the others, that theory of them being different beings in this world makes them infected by the spell cast?

Above, Lorcan overheard this while studying the new cloak figure, something about this new face or unknown face behind the hood, didn't sit well with him.

"So…that explains it all, but who is this Superior? I sense...something different about this stranger." Lorcan muttered softly with careful eyes watching the character, he sense something terrible from this Superior person, much darkness then he ever came across, especially for a former Scarred Ruler like the teen dragon under cover to keep his identity from being found out.

"Okay buddy, so why have ya gone through all the trouble to come meet up with us?" Phobos asked off rudely of what this hooded bogy was doing in this world after the gang finally finished up.

"Ah yes, my reason for being here; It should be obvious." The Superior slowly spoke from distracting himself with that subject. "It was simply a plan…a plan of acquiring the crown that represents the Element of Magic. And on an added side, gaining the Triforce from its wielder," He spoke from addressing towards Twilight & towards Ben that broth shared frowns in hearing what this cloak figure was after, something that belongs to the two.

The group was on the defensive, in case of any sudden movement from this shady character. Nyx watched with worry while Spike & Phobos were a bit unease, if they were Dragons instead of dogs, they could fight better. But still hiding in her spot, Sunset Shimmer seem to be more worried about the Superior being here in her own world

"I was the one that charged the task and the plan to one you already know." The Superior explained from when his hooded face looked between the others, almost hard to tell if his hidden eyes were watching them…or just…looking for something. "Isn't that right…Sunset Shimmer?" The hooded figure responded off with the very name when his hidden gaze behind the hood finally lays eyes on Sunset's position.

Suddenly, the Superior fires off lighting from his hands, but it was not directed at the heroes but, at someone else by surprise. "Gaaugh…" Sunset Shimmer made a yelp cry as she was zapped with a first wave of electricity that made her fall on her hands and knees after the lightning spell was stopped for a moment.

The gang saw that in utter surprise, if this enemy hiding his true face and appearance was indeed supposed to be a pony….how could he use magic if he turn human?

"That was a sample." The Superior spoke from his hands charging again, before unleashing a stronger voltage this time around.

"Gaaaaaauaaaghhhh," She was making such cries while the sparks were electrocuting her very being, and the others just stood, horrified by this action. "Waauuaaauguhhh…." Sunset was grabbing her sides in feeling pain from the voltage still hurting, but the Superior was not stopping. "Gaauh-Huuughh…hugh-gaapph…" She was gasping from when the hooded being cease action to let Sunset catch her breath.

"Hay mister, wha in tarnation do ya think yer're doing?" Applejack snapped in protesting this ill treatment, attacking somebody that's already too beaten to fight back is darn right nasty.

"Sunset is receiving punishment for failure in her mission." The Superior simply answered off from not even looking at the girl back-talking him.

"But that's even harsher than what she ever done." Fluttershy spoke with a bit of a worried shy tone, she gets the feeling that this Superior is far worse than all the terrible things Sunset Shimmer ever did around the school.

"Very true, which makes for excellent handling in directing other's courses to one's own will," The Superior responded with a hidden remark over such a manner.

"Directing them? What does that mean?" Pinkie Pie raised an eyebrow in being confused, and she wasn't the only one, the others were baffled too.

"That Sunset Shimmer is who she is…from my own course in directing her path. Through everything that has happened in the beginning," The Superior calmly yet coldly explained the subject that Sunset Shimmer is who she has become…from his guiding.

Now the others were shocked, but not so much as Sunset Shimmer was in hearing what they all heard. The Superior was running things with the girl the whole time, but Sunset always thought she ran things on her own and aiding him, what could this all mean?

"Wha…what are you talking about, Superior?" Sunset slowly asked in trying to stand up from feeling her aches. "I…came across you when…" She was about to explain a bit of her own past, but was cut by the hooded figure.

"You secretly wanted to learn the secrets of the mirror that showed you images of you being a princess, however, Celestia said you learn when you were ready." The Superior spoke of something to which silence Sunset Shimmer, he knows about that part of what she did. "I knew I could lead you to secretly begin researching the mirror behind Celestia's back, it helped change you, bit by bit in what Celestia tried to stop." He issued from secretly having Sunset try to learn about the mirror that leads to this world. "And when you were about to be removed from being the teacher's student, the darkness inside began to blossom, you resisted and siege to escape into this world we stand." The hooded figure concluded all that has transpired to this moment with Sunset Shimmer, being as the tyrant ruling this world by the school.

"Then from the beginning, you somehow pushed Sunset Shimmer and had her mess in our world?" Rainbow Dash asked off with an annoyed look in starting to see it's all this guy's fault, that Sunset came and mess up the Main Five's friendship.

"Quote so, but…" The Superior lightly nodded his hooded head in response before ushering another fact. "To truly have her crave power, I've visited her in a place not even Celestia knew where I strike her prodigy." He address in having a way to manipulate Sunset where Celestia couldn't reach to stop his work.

"And that would be…?" Rarity slowly asked off in wondering what was the answer to this puzzling question.

"The same place he tried with Twilight. Her dreams," Ben suddenly gasped with realization, the Superior visited Sunset by her dreams to convince her to do selfish & awful things behind Celestia's back.

"I've helped speak to mold Sunset Shimmer, even offered her…a seat at the table, to join us." The Superior waved off a free hand in exclaiming another issue related to the subject with Sunset, a chance of joining ranks.

"Join you?" Nyx raised an eyebrow in hearing right, the Superior wanted Sunset to join a group? It kinda brought back memories from Lorcan's old Brotherhood gang.

"In the past, I've only had so few, and this one, my offer stood before her leave." The Superior calmly issued about how he's at first, had a few in his group while he gave Sunset a chance to become a part of them before she enter this world. "Had she completed her assigned mission, she would have become, the fourteenth member….of our growing organization." He ushered to wiggle his left hand up to signal how many & what kinda group order he runs; an organization.

"Fourteenth," Twilight spoke off surprised in just hearing this and knowing of what the number part would have stood for.

"But then that means….there's about thirteen of them in all!" Spike held up to try to count his paws before yelping to notice that there are twelve other guys besides this Superior character.

"Oh man, talk about unlucky 13 and why does the number with such an organization sounds familiar?" Phobos groans to moan about this being bad, especially when stuck on a number center around unlucky moments in one's life.

"When all I had…was being the best, he came to me…told me that my chances of being princess could come true. And I would even be offered to join others of great importance." Sunset slowly spoke from her position, about her involvement with the Superior before coming into this human-pony version of an alternative world. "I wanted it so bad…all I wanted was to be with those that see me and accept me in the role of majestic rank." She cringe her eyes from feeling so helpless in just wanting to be in a place she belongs.

"Sunset…" Twilight looked to Sunset with soft and regretful eyes; the girl was almost….like herself. She was so much focusing on being a protégé to Celestia, Twilight never understood something always being missed in life; friends, no matter the type of personality one shows, it can be lonely at the top without even a single friend to help them out.

"It is truly a pity, when you reach for such heights, if you're not fully prepared to fall…" The Superior slowly spoke with a darken tone in showing a strange atmosphere around his being. "Then you'll learn it, the hard way. Crucio," He pointed his right hand with some strange object similar to a beam saber when he spoke the words.

"Gaygh..Aaaaughhh…" Sunset Shimmer suddenly was suddenly acting out in feeling excruciating pain to make her fall the ground.

Now the group that saw this was almost utterly flabbergasted, nothing came from the hooded figure, but what from witnessing Sunset in pain was no joke.

"Twilight; what did he do?" Spike asked his smart friend in not understanding, what just happen?

"That was…it was a Curse Spell. The Cruciatus Curse, also known as the Torture Curse," Twilight Sparkle slowly spoke with widened eyes of horror; she knows crystal clear what spell that the Superior used.

"Crucio," The Superior once again held out his object handle to perform the same spell.

"Graaaugh…Aahhh…AAAhh…." Sunset Shimmer again was struggling across the ground, feeling pain so excruciating all over, her scrounged expression showed that it hurt.

"Ouch, torture is right! It looks painful!" Phobos cringe a bit from almost feeling sorry for the poor former villain; Sunset Shimmer to be going through this.

"There are said to be, 'Three Unforgivable Curses' and the only way to learn them…is through the Forbidden Book of Spells." Twilight explained from being in deep thought in recalling the book she has interested to her by Princess Celestia, she too has come across some certain spells that have earn much interest to be very well recognized.

"Crucio," The Superior again unleashed the same spell to the defenseless Sunset.

"Gaaah…Uuuuah…Aaahh…" Sunset cried out from almost being in tears, she held her chest, shook her arms on her back, trying to fight off excruciating pain coursing through her body from the Superior's spell.

"There are 'three' o' those things?" Applejack raised an eyebrow to Twilight almost having a terrible feeling that if one spell that's forbidden is a part of three, one would hate to know the other two.

"Are they all that bad?" Rainbow Dash asked from looking very cautious that seeing Sunset go through that much pain, it wasn't funny, it wasn't even satisfying as payback from her bullying, it was just…wrong.

"Yes, but from the three labeled as the Unforgivable Curses, only one is the worst of it all." Twilight Sparkle narrow her eyes with an even more serious concerns that though there are three spells, only one curse is shown to be the worst possible piece of many.

"I really hate to find out which that would be." Ben issued from looking a bit tense, if there is such a spell that makes Twilight worry the most over, then its best not to see it.

At this moment, the gang saw the hooded figure stop for a moment, giving Sunset a moments to recover, but found her struggle to push up all the more agonizing from all the pain she just been induced to.

"Please…gauuhh…have mercy!" Sunset Shimmer spoke from her exhausted voice and gritting teeth from enduring the pain to push herself up. "I've…always thought you were the only one that had faith in me!" She spoke from looking up at the hooded being known as the Superior, he was nice and commented her, even agreed that she is a princess that should have been one, she trusted…the only being after she lost love and privilege of becoming a princess.

"Faith can mean many things, my dear. For example…" The Superior spoke in a false sense of being kind while stating a fact here. "How do you think you lost happiness from one being to become what has forge your being." He shrugs off one hand to wave off about a topic that rang a bell or two here for Sunset.

"Hugh…you…you don't mean….Flash Sentry?" Sunset yelped from surprise gasp, even Ben heard this to listen in. "You…cause me to…lose him?" The girl slowly muttered off in not believing this, Flash was the only thing she cared in Equestria, but the day she lost him before still being mean under Celestia trying to guide her to being a right princess…the Superior…caused her entire life to fall apart from one change of course action.

"I would give more details, but not until your punishment has pass…Crucio!" The Superior shrugs off to say before speaking darkly and held out the same hand to unleash an unseen spell on the helpless child.

"Aaaaauuaarrrrghhh…" Sunset Shimmer held her chest and rolled on the ground, her excruciating pain of torture was becoming harder and harder to bear, almost losing conscious even.

"Mommy, we have to stop that man from hurting Sunset!" Nyx cried out from feeling that she couldn't stand watching someone suffer so much torture. "She may have been bad, but what he's doing is meaner!" She issued to Twilight and everyone else heard it too from where their expressions got a more sterner appearance; enough is enough!

"Crucio," The Superior spoke loudly in firing another spell, this one looking to be seen as an electric bolt about to course through Sunset's body on contact…

Suddenly, a magical wall was place up that block Sunset & the spell from making contact before disbursing. And then Sunset had a small moment to lift her exhausted self to see that the one that stopped the Superior's spell was…Twilight Sparkle.

"That's enough!" Twilight yelled off from standing between this new enemy and a fallen former foe with a seriously upset tone & expression. "You've done more than enough to make someone lose so much in everything around them, friends, love ones, how much are you intending to go until you’re satisfied!" Twilight was really mad, this Superior of whatever, whoever he is, went over such lengths, it was just about the evilest thing that she's seen other villains go for.

"Satisfaction comes…when others understand, that failure, is no excuse for not doing it right." The Superior addressed off with a calmly dark claim of the matter, those that fail must suffer from failure, in order to learn. It's a harsh treatment is what it is.

"Ugh…hugh…Twilight…" Sunset Shimmer tried to push her hands on the ground to nearly sit herself up, almost looking more a mess than ever. Again, Twilight was helping her after everything she's done, they were enemy rivals for the crown, but even now how can the girl help someone like her when she's getting what she deserved?

"Hang on, I'll help heal you." Twilight turn to hold up her hands to grip Sunset's shoulders and when the new princess was focusing, magic from her body & crown were covering Sunset.

"You're…helping me? Why…you…?" Sunset can't believe that Twilight was using her own magic to help her recover from being tortured by the Superior.

"It'll be okay, you don't have to take punish from what 'he' had you do." Twilight calmly spoke during her healing of Sunset while she glared angrily at the Superior, seeing he was the one that lead this poor girl down the wrong path.

"I…I…don't know what else to say." Sunset Shimmer responded in not knowing if saying thanks was enough for what Twilight is doing.

"How very touching. Once bitter enemies, now as friends," The Superior spoke from seeing this scene be played out before him, but he has spoken with a shrew remark about this.

Twilight only stared at the Superior with an annoyed face while Sunset looked worried about if the only person like her from Equestria, who believes she can make friends by the right way of Friendship, is going up against this cloak hooded foe that even Sunset fears of his strength.

As Ben & the Main Five watched from what this unknown enemy would try, the guy still had his back turn to them all, but was casting a spell that created an electric ball of blue energy that sparked with a shocking effect if ever got in contact.

"She looks a lot like you." The Superior slowly spoke with a mysterious response towards Twilight's area.

"Hugh?" Ben looked to the guy weirdly in hearing this out so suddenly.

"What?" Nyx and the Main Five were also lost in what they heard this strange character just say.

"What's that supposed to mean?" Twilight challenged off in not fully understanding what the Superior meant, 'someone that looks like her', did he meant the alternative world's Twilight, or… "Hugh!" But that was put on hold ‘cause something ended up distracting her focus moment.

The Superior was slowly turning around in preparing to aim up his left hand to fire a charged sphere of electric energy at the princess girl.

Ben Mare quickly brought forth his sword in defense and rushed to be in front of Twilight & Sunset's position.

And in a shocking sense of both literal and metaphorically speaking, the Superior fired an electric sphere while unleashing an electric current volts to push the thing. But Ben used his Master Sword in time to hold off the attack from coming near Twilight's area. The others could see and judge that Ben was holding out, but this character was no joke, he was packing some serious juice even if he's from Equestria can still use magic.

"Grrugh...auuughh…" Ben struggled to hold up the Master Sword in blocking this sphere almost coming to his face, this attack was almost pushing him back..almost. The guy was activating his Triforce power that glowed, giving him an extra strength boost.

Then in an amazing feat by Ben, he pushed his sword with enough strength to rebound the attack. The electric sphere was shot up into the air after Ben's force to get it away from him and the others on the ground, "KAPOW-POWWWVHMNMM!" And in a sudden surprise, the attack disburst into a giant explosive implies effect like a star going out that covered a lot near the roof of the school. And soon only the electric sparks started to fade out before the attack vanished into particles while the only thing left of its existence, was its loudest effect.

Above the school, a hidden Lorcan saw what happened and was almost astounded by that sheer feat of display.

"Jeez, any closer and this building's insurance would have hit the roof. Not that it had a roof left if that attack came any closer." Lorcan spoke off from being lucky, that shot didn't get him. "Whoever this Superior is, he's no laughing matter." He issued from pushing his lad-back personality in seeing this fight is serious.

As everyone back on the ground watched in amazing feat, Ben somehow managed to repel the attack and what came down was only some lose rubble that was off the edges of the school. But as everyone notice this, their focus was on one figure dress in a cloak uniform with his face hidden behind the hood; the Superior. While everything in this time freeze world was quaking from the aftershock of that earlier attack, the cloak being showed nothing of a response that his attack was stopped. And weirder still was when something was heard in the background…music.

"Uh oh; that sounds like; 'Disappeared', from the Kingdom Hearts II Soundtrack!" Nyx yelped to Break the Fourth Wall in stating what is being heard in the background before the fight starts.

"How does she know?" Spike asked off puzzled in being near Nyx, how does she know that?

"What else, she inherited that from Pinkie Pie." Phobos shrug off to mention this off about how Nyx can do what Pinkie Pie can do, Break Fourth Walls, possibly both the pony & human version.

"The Master Sword; And the Elements themselves," The Superior spoke in studying from Ben's Master Sword to the elements that were used off by Ben Mare & even Twilight Sparkle, "Truly marvelous weapons." The being behind the hood compliment on the very items that were structural objects of greatest.

Ben stood where he was, looking ready with his weapon. Twilight stood up with herself to keep Sunset from being harm again. The Main Five ready themselves by getting near Twilight & Ben while Nyx kept close near Spike & Phobos.

"Where they only in more…" The Superior spoke from continuing his talk about the elements & the sword in question.

As the hooded character stood from where he was as much fallen debris came down slowly almost as if time was slowing down…

"Capable hands," The Superior spoke with a dark motion in questioning how marvelous the Elements & the Master Sword would be, if they were in capable hands of how to use them…properly.

Twilight, the Main Five, even Ben glared at the creature that seem to be so calm and showed to be unfazed. This Superior was truly acting like a superior being, even to question the elements & the sword in being in their possession. The Superior continues to stare at this group, still almost psyching them out with his mysterious presence & riddle sentences.

"Perhaps it doesn't pay to be too loyal to one's heart." The Superior spoke in almost making a dark humor remark, that wielding such powers despite what they believe in their hearts of Friendship & Love, maybe not what makes the users such 'good' choices.

Now the gang was really glaring with a serious face expression in having heard enough from this guy. Then Ben Mare got himself into a position with his sword while Twilight & the Mane Five equally prepared themselves for a tough battle to come from this new foe.

"Huh-Huh-Huh-Huhh-huuuuh…" The Superior lightly cackles in a hidden response as his hands show more glowing blue magic auras, equally preparing himself to battle against these enemies.

This battle…might possibly be more challenging, then Twilight & her friends from here to Equestria have ever prepared themselves to face. From Nightmare Moon, Discord, The Changelings, King Sombra, Boris The Red Devil Pony, Lorcan's Brotherhood & Dragon Army to the Scarred Ruler himself, Tirek, the Three Tribes' leaders to Sunset Shimmer's Evil Demonic form, there are still possibly more enemies to still face…and they might be even stronger then the last few batches.
The fight against the Superior has arrived. But can Twilight and her friends defeat someone who is more powerful than Sunset Shimmer?
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Hey, JusSonic, Is there A Part 2 To this or you just didn't feel like Making Part 2 of this, just asking? :|