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Cream the Rabbit's Adventures in Comics chapter 5

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On with the next comic!

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Our favorite trio of Cream, Shadow and Butters stood at a cliff that has a sign which is labeled "Echo Point". Why is it called that, you ask; Because if someone were to make an echo here, you can hear it in the distance.

Butters looks up as he hears the echo which calls out "HELLO!" The boy calls back, "HELLO!"

"Wow; that sounded odd." Cream said as she and Shadow looks shocked at this. Usually, someone would've made an echo, not the other way around.

"Well, sorry for what I'm going to say which would make me sound like a jerk but..." Shadow clears his throat then yells at Butters, "CAN'T YOU DO ANYTHING RIGHT?!"

Butters yelps and jumps as the echo "CAN'T YOU DO ANYTHING RIGHT?!" replied right back. Cream spoke out in sorry, "Wow, that is an echo."

"Awwww, that was still rude, Shadow." Butters said, shaking a bit.

"Hey, I apologize, didn't I?" Shadow points out to Butters with a shrug making Cream shake her head.

Author's note
Okay, the next comic is done. What do you guys think? More to come so read, review and suggest!
Cream, Shadow and Butters hang out at Echo Point where they make echoes. But Butters somehow got it wrong.
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