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Cream the Rabbit's Adventures in Comics chapter 1

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Yes, folks, there as a Winnie the Pooh comic which ran from 1978 to 1988. Since Orange Ratchet is making his own, may as well get on the wagon with more Cream the Rabbit stuff. Can't wait to do this, so read on, and enjoy the first fanmake of a comic strip.

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Cream and her friends are hanging out together at a birthday party, having fun and eating cake. Cream and Shadow were talking while the former offer a piece of birthday cake to Gosalyn.

"So Gosalyn, want to have another slice of birthday cake?" Cream ask Gosalyn happily.

"Nah, no thanks, Cream," Gosalyn said with a smile, refusing the cake. The girl duck motions to Cream, who leans in to hear her whisper, "Psst. Ask me the question again."

Cream looks puzzled but asks the same question anyway, "All righty...Uh, Gosalyn? Will you like to have another slice of birthday cake?"

"Sure do!"Gosalyn exclaims as she happily took the birthday cake on a plate from Cream.

"What was that about?" Shadow asks Gosalyn puzzled as Gosalyn happily walks away. "I mean, ask Cream to ask the question again, while saying "no" the first time when you wanted it anyway?"

"Simple; my parents told me no seconds, but they didn't say anything about thirds!"

"Ah...in that case, very smart, kid, very smart."

The End

Author's note
The first fanmake of the comic strip is done. You like it? These chapters will be short, but what did you expect from newspaper comic strips? More will come so read, review and suggest!
More short adventures of Cream the Rabbit and friends based on comic strips of Winnie the Pooh.
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Skullgal94's avatar
Wow, pretty funny:)